When it comes to writing lifeless headlines you are not alone

You have mere moments to capture a prospect’s attention.

One of the single most powerful tools you have to carry out this task is your headline. Here are several techniques to creating  a “compelling and selling” headline and a few tips to help you get the job done.

Tap into Your Prospects’ Emotions

According to psychologists our buying decisions are based first on our emotions. Use headlines which offer your readers a strong emotional benefit or reaction, make them feel compelled to read beyond the headline. Make them want the knowledge you are sharing.

Example:
The 20-Minute Technique that Will Make You a Business Genius taps into readers’ desires to feel smart, powerful even.

Cute kitten

If all else fails, add a kitten pic ;)

Other emotions you can tap into are the desire to feel:
1. Attractive
2. Assertive
3. Sexy
4. Confident
5. Pampered
6. Energetic
7. A sense of belonging – you are not alone
8. In control of their own destiny
9. Proud
10. Wealthy
11. Respected
12. Safe

Make your headline active

To compel it’s important to use active language rather than passive language – language that shows movement and commands attention. Language that guides the reader, that shows them where to go.

For example, “Stop Your Sugar Cravings Today With This Simple Step,” is a good enough headline however it doesn’t command action nor does it  tap into any emotions of any kind. A quick tweak and it becomes “Conquer Your Sugar Cravings With This Simple Step.” Conquer is an active and emotionally powerful word. Readers receive the benefit of feeling powerful and in control and it commands action.

Let Your Reader Know They’re Important

The word YOU is a very powerful word. It let’s your reader’s feel as if you’re talking to them specifically and interested in solving their problems, issues and helping them achieve their desires, which of course you are. Insincerity shows in your writing so you must believe in your product. If you don’t, get a new business.

Instead of using I, Me or We in your headlines, use You.

Using the headline example above compare these two options

  • “Conquer Your Sugar Cravings With This Simple Step.
  • “Conquer Sugar Cravings with Our System”

People want to know what’s in it for them and when they can assess that information in the headline, they’re going to want  to continue reading your blog post and get to know you more. You don’t know where your prospect is in the sales cycle, so they could also be in a position to make  a purchase.

Here are three more ideas for powerful headlines:

* Make a promise – Earn £1000 a day
* Make it newsworthy – New program guarantees you’ll earn £1000 a day.
* Ask a question – Do you want to ensure your financial future?

Remember, you will have to back up extravagant claims and if it looks hype-y and spammy to you, your reader will think the same. It’s not getting them into the right mindset to read more of your content.

Three Simple Steps to Write Headlines That Sell

You have some ideas about what types of headlines sell now how do you begin to write those powerful headlines?

  • Get to know your audience intimately. What are their hopes, dreams, desires, and problems? Visualise them, name them, write specifically for them. Understanding your audience will help you create an emotional and powerful headline directed specifically at your ideal reader.
  • Determine how your products or services are going to make your prospects’ lives better or solve their problems. For example if you sell fitness equipment and your audience struggles with feeling attractive then you can create a headline that highlights a specific benefit your fitness equipment offers to solve that problem.
  • Write ten to twenty, even twenty, possible headlines. Not only will this give you practice writing compelling headlines, it’ll help you zero in on that one perfect headline.

And if you think you have a few winners you can always test them for conversion rates to find out which headline is more effective. Words like “secrets” often hook people in, but be careful not to over use it. Remember your blog’s front page looks like a magazine rack, lots of images and bold headlines screaming read me. The headline that makes you click, that makes you want to read more is the one that works.

Think back to your Twitter stream, again compare it to the magazine rack.

  • What headlines jump out at you?
  • What headlines grab you by the throat?
  • What headlines make you feel slimy and give you the urge to go hose yourself down in the garden (that’s the yard for our American readers)?
  • What makes you click?

Marketing and copywriting experts consider your headline to be the most import element of any effective marketing piece. That applies to blog posts too. A good headline is nothing in comparison to a great headline. Spend quality time on writing on your headlines, your blog will reap the benefits in terms of growing subscribers and visitors.

Share your headline writing tips in the comments.

Sarah

Sarah Arrow is the author of the “Always Be Creating Ebook” for bloggers. This is not an extract of her ebook, it’s all original :)

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Sarah Arrow is the managing editor of Birds on the Blog, in real life she is the communications director of a same day courier service. She gives away a fabulous Successful Business Blogging ebook and is co- author of the soon to be published Zero to Blogger book.

Comments

  1. Nice article Sarah.

    I especially like this tip: “Write ten to twenty, even twenty, possible headlines.”

    I probably go through 20 by the time I get finished tweaking but your comment made me realize that I’ve never tried putting all 20 together and then picking. It’s a subtle difference but I just tried it with my latest post and I like it! I’m going to do that from now on.
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  2. Who would know that it takes that much effort to just get a headline….!

  3. Mitch Sullivan says:

    I saw this same article posted months ago by another author.

    I guess all you ‘professional bloggers’ must share articles.

    • Hi Mitch, similar titles and similar suggestions would make an article seem familiar. Copyblogger used the “you are not alone” title and 5 minutes later I had 6 emails with the title in it appear in my inbox. It works on getting emails opened.

      You should try “Sick of Shoddy recruitment? You are not alone” Let me know how it works for you.
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      • Mitch Sullivan says:

        Earlier I posted 4 links to exactly the same article all by different authors, but for some reason it’s been moderated.

        Anyway, my point is that you professional bloggers must all circulate the same stuff.

        • I will look for in the spam filter but as I wrote this article, it wont be exactly the same. I also have probably 8 variations of headline post on various of my own blogs.
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          • Mitch Sullivan says:

            Seems I can’t post links to other sites here.

            Sarah, this article that you’ve apparently written, has appeared exactly as it does here on loads of other internet sites as far back as 2009, all claiming different authorship.

  4. Wow! Learning so much, this is awesome Sarah, thanks. xxx

    Not sure if I’ll live long enough for all this “learning”!
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  5. Hi Sarah
    Headlines are definitely the way. I spend a lot of time getting presenters to use the headline principle on their slides and visuals for the same reasons. It’s also interesting to note the differing levels of emotional content in newspaper headlines depending on the readership.
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